Wow, so I started writing a review of Captain Marvel almost exactly 1 year ago, but its been sitting in my draft folder as I stewed (procrastinated) since then. On the plus side I did come to some odd realizations about the film in the meantime, which are hopefully worth discussing.
Just to jump back to 2019 for a second. I always found there was something strange about Captain Marvel, I liked the character, the themes, the movie was funny, everything really.
BUT – for whatever reason I never really felt that emotionally invested in the film. Definitely there were significant moments, in fact quite a few, though in the end they were always moments, rather than an overall sense of investment in the story. I suspect there were a few reasons for this – oddly though I realized as I idly day-dreamed about this while I supposed to be working, that our two Captains, Marvel and America: Winter soldier, have a lot in common – with a few key differences.
Bear with me and I’ll do a summary, and then a contrast comparison.
Both stories begin with a similar establishing scenario – fish out of water MCs who are mostly supportive of the institutions they are part of – ‘Vers’ is a Kree soldier, Steve is an important part of SHIELD.
Due to some external events both characters have to go ‘on the run’ and buddy up with other characters to discover what has gone on with their respective institutions and basically have a complete reversal on their perspective of the ‘good-guys’ and are hit with personal challenges along the way.
Some of the contrasts are interesting to me however:
In Winter Soldier – Captain America questions SHIELD’s plan to deploy killer heli-carriers for pre-emptive strikes, Fury accuses Steve of lacking understanding of the world – in Captain Marvel Vers is warned not to be emotional in order to advance within the Kree, this isn’t really tied to any external issue (at this stage). Both beginnings are interesting however as we go on I think I can show that part of the problem is that Captain Marvel’s personal journey doesn’t match with the plot as well as Winter Solider.
When Steve investigates SHIELD he discovers that Hydra has infiltrated and compromised the entire organization, AND to make it personal, has essentially down the same mentally and physically to his best friend Bucky. The juxtaposition of both SHIELD and Bucky work well as they severally challenge Captain America institutionally and personally.
Captain Marvel’s journey is technically more complex, but doesn’t gel quite the same. On her journey Vers discovers that the Skrull (the assumed baddies) are effectively refugees, and the Kree genocidal maniacs. On the personal level Vers finds out the the Kree have been manipulating and gaslighting her. Now these are not insignificant plot points – and as mentioned above, in my opinion really interesting themes. My criticism though, is in some respects the institutional and personal elements of the story don’t fit together in any particular way. The only way these elements interact is really just to practically tie the plot points together, and almost just make it easier and quicker for Captain Marvel to turn on the Kree and save the Skrull.
To re-iterate, basically our MC discovers that not only are the bad-guys dicks in warfare, they are dicks to her specifically.
The revelation of Bucky being the Winter Soldier didn’t make the story easier it added personal complications that made the whole story work.
In Captain Marvel the two elements are essentially co-incidental, and made the plot more convenient not more challenging. For example the story about Vers discovering her past didn’t need the Skrulls except as macguffins that moved the plot on.
If I could propose a modest change it could be something like a faction of Skrulls that had been brain washed and used to betray others – that Vers was tasked with managing – and that rather than Carol Danvers essentially just randomly being on a test flight – her exposure to the tesseract could have been intentional by either Skrull rebels or the Kree as a test to create a powerful soldier. The point of this change would be to keep the institutional issues in line with the personal.
Having subplots not completely enmeshed isn’t the end of the world for a movie, however it can undermine the emotional impact – because each revelation kind of just ‘is what it is’ rather than having flow-on significance. When Bucky is revealed as Winter Soldier, its both the personification of the hydra corruption and intensely personal for Steve, calling into question what he is going to do.
It could be argued that similar revelations occur in Captain Marvel, but it just doesn’t fit the same. Vers/Carol finds out that the Kree have been gaslighting her AND are geocoding the Skrull. The two issues are related because the reason Carol got caught up in the situation is her mentor/CO was (a Skrull or a Kree I can’t remember) and both the actions are objectively terrible and signal the Kree as obvious bad-guys but as I recall Carol eventually helps the Skrull more because Fury and friends convince her ‘that’s what heroes do’ rather than the two plots driving each other.
It think what I’m trying to say is that Captain Marvel needed a plot that represented her internal struggle – which could have elevated the movie to something more memorable. Again this isn’t a criticism of any particularly part of the film, its objectively fine – its just an overthough point I considered as I held off on reviewing Captain Marvel.